Episode 6x20

[Host Lex]

ALEX: 28/40

Originality/Creativity: 9/15. I liked the idea of casting parties and behind the scenes stuff, that was creative.

Entertainment: 10/15. Started off pretty entertaining. The Michael being killed plot came outta no where and was bizarre haha. I thought Kim would be his motivation to get back and shape and appear on the show again, but the Michael murder was a bit off I thought

Grammar: 9/10. No noticeable errors. Just one point shy of perfect because the formatting wasn't interesting

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CANDICE: 33/40

Originality/Creativity: 13/15. I loved that she went into the mental side effects that the game could have. Writing it as if she was having post traumatic stress disorder was pretty creative.

Entertainment: 12/15. I lol'd a few times. I liked the triggers that flashed her back to her season, like the mention of JOHN. That part was great. And her competitive nature coming out as it did in her original season.

Grammar: 8/10. I caught a couple of mistakes, but nothing big.

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CHASE: 29/40

Originality/Creativity: 12/15. The idea of doing it as the pre-season interview that Probst does each season is creative. I liked that. Definitely pretty different.

Entertainment: 8/15. I thought some jokes were good while others missed tbh. The commercial was funny

Grammar: 9/10. I noticed a few grammar mistakes, but he told me it was meant to be how that person would be talking since it's interview style. His nice format kinda evened that out to a 9 for me

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KIM: 30/40

Originality/Creativity: 11/15. Nothing particularly unique about it, though I did like the public's perception of her angle. That was probably the strongest part

Entertainment: 10/15. The two Rory parts were the funniest. I lol'd at his phone call to her. Apart from that, there wasn't too much that did it for as far as entertainment goes.

Grammar: 9/10. Well written with few mistakes. One off from perfect because of the uninteresting formatting.

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MIKI: 19/40

Originality/Creativity: 8/15. Her approach was pretty typical. Nothing stood out as being very different or unique to me.

Entertainment: 7/15. Full of 'miki humor'. Lot's of cunt goddess sex drug shit. Not my personal favorite tbh. It was pretty long and I kind of wanted it to be over fairly early. It had its moments though

Grammar: 4/10. Not great. Seemed like she wrote it all in one go without checking back on anything. A lot of mistakes

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SYDNEY: 32/40

Originality/Creativity: 12/15. Was a bit of a mix of a few different people's stories, but that's just because of the order I read them in. It had its creative moments.

Entertainment: 11/15. The post traumatic stress stuff was good here too. Like her thinking her baby would turn on her the second it was born, and her thoughts on her actual Jury compared to her SI Jury. Overall I thought it was fairly funny

Grammar: 9/10. Would've been a 10 because of the above average formatting, but she had enough mistakes to bump it down for me.

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VEE: 28/40

Originality/Creativity: 10/15. lol another pregnancy one. We got a few of those! This one didn't really offer up anything too new compared to the rest.

Entertainment: 9/15. Same pregnancy/sex/dildo jokes as Miki's, but they worked better here I think. The shorter length helped with that. It was entertaining enough.

Grammar: 9/10. Same as the rest really. Few mistakes but no thrilling formatting.

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[Host Lex]

I tend to go pretty easy on people when it comes to judging. Most are around the same mark. I did kind of feel that they were all solid, but none really wow'd me above the rest, so I guess my scores reflect that. Candice got the highest average, which I can agree with. I think hers was my favorite overall.

Two more judges would be preferred!

[Semhar The Poet]

Hey everyone, I am back! I heard we were judging people and as we all know that is my hidden talent. I want to point out before I dive into a sea of judgement that I am beyond sad to see a lot of my favorite people gone already. Especially Judd/Shawna/Danielle.

Anyways, off to be a cock about this whole ordeal.

[Andrea]

I'm working on it! Almost done

[Andrea]

hahahah Sekou seems to be getting around in these stories

[Semhar The Poet]

Alex:
Originality/Creativity: 8/15
I am assuming Alex was smoking something when he wrote this. It wasn't bad, but it was like weird...? I don't understand it at all. I guess it was creative to see the whole thing with the reunions, and all that, but a "love" story wasn't exactly creative. I did like that it was more like a hate story than anything else, tho it doesn't really tie in with his infatuation coming into AS if she broke his heart? #loopholegallore

Entertainment: 7/15.
First of all who the fuck is Ellen? Why did a character that came half way through the story suddenly become super important and he is doing it for her and the memory of Michael? What?! I was not really entertained, it was for a little bit but it was mostly boring to me because I didn't see why it suddenly went from a heart-wrenching non-love story to a murder thing... it was more confusing than entertaining.

Grammar 9/10.
I didn't notice anything, but I don't believe in perfection.

Candice:
Originality/Creativity: 14/15.
I don't believe in perfect scores, but this was amazing. Dwelling on how hard the experience it's out and making it some kind of journal for her mental disorders was amazing. Very creative approach as well, and I liked that it was something with a lot of action or romance, but truly about herself and what the effects were was amazing.

Entertainment: 14/15.
At first it was somewhat slow, but when I got into it I couldn't stop reading. I actually ignored AIM while I read it. It was very entertaining and it had some fun moments, I love how she related it to the stuff that happened in her season and the ending was amazing as well.

Grammar: 6/10.
She forgot to capitalize a couple of things, but it was not awful. I deducted points for the horrendous orange font though.

Chase:
Originality/Creativity: 10/15
The interview and set-up was very creative, I like how it started and how it developed, so I guess it was pretty creative in that way.

Entertainment: 10/15
It pains me to give Chase bad scores, but it was just okay. Like some jokes were great [like the explanation for Sherea's disapeareance] but in general I think it tried too hard and most of them missed.

Grammar: 8/10
Some mistakes, nothing major. Passable.

Kim:
Originality/Creativity: 11/15
More about psychology, I liked that, and how the public affected her life, but I feel like it went too far with it to a point where it was too much fiction.

Entertainment: 9/15
Not very entertaining, it was kind of a drag. It was kind of melodramatic which was just a little too much, I think. It was nor horrendous but it was not amazing either.

Grammar: 8/10
I noticed a couple of minor mistakes, nbd.


Miki:
Originality/Creativity: 3/15
Talking about sex and alcohol... how creative, isn't that what everyone has been talking about since the season started? It doesn't even really explain why she is in the state that she is on, it kind of is just a lot of cuss words, sex talk, talking about how every man wants her [yeah right] and then being drunk. Eh...

Entertainment: 3/15
I was actually really annoyed with this, I know it probably sounds super biased but it was just so annoying. "Girl" is used a million times, and I think Miki tried too hard to make herself look like some bad-ass bitch, just like Chase tried too hard to be funny, she tried too hard to project the image she wants people to see of her. It was a drag to read.

Grammar: 1/10
She had not only awful grammar but spelling, in reality she could have corrected it easily because the mistakes were as easy as "you're" instead of her writing "your", not using capitalization in proper names and using it in places where it doesn't go at all. She also didn't use past tense correctly, which is super basic -_-

Sydney:
Originality/Creativity: 14/15
The images, the formatting, the fonts... it was all amazing. And it was so creative not only to explore her downwards spiral, but to write in third person, it felt almost like a documentary or some kind of tv show relating her story. Kinda like E-True Hollywood Story. Absolute adoration for this <3

Entertainment: 14/15
Oh.My.God. I died, I literally died laughing, this was by faer the most hilarious and entertaining read ever, I could not look away, it was such a trainwreck but in a good way and OMG. And then Jynx, and omg just wow <3

Grammar: 9/10
Once again, I don't believe in perfection, but there were no mistakes I could see and the formatting was fantastic.

Vee:
Originality/Creativity: 4/15
It was very much like Miki's, a little better but still nothing too impressive.

Entertainment: 7/15
It was alright, it was funny at points, but I feel like since I had alreayd read Miki's it wasn't all that amazing, to me.

Grammar: 9/10
It seemed fine to me.

[Andrea]

ALEX
Originality/Creativity: Was your story creative? Unique? Or was it typical? [15 POINTS] 11. I thought it was more personal and it felt really touching.

Entertainment: Were the judges entertained while reading your story? Was it fun? Or was it boring? [15 POINTS] 10. The reunion part and Kim leaving him was funny.

Grammar: Was it well written and formatted? Or were there mistakes along the way? [10 POINTS] 9

30/40

CANDICE
Originality/Creativity: Was your story creative? Unique? Or was it typical? [15 POINTS]12, sounds like a rehab monologue

Entertainment: Were the judges entertained while reading your story? Was it fun? Or was it boring? [15 POINTS] 7, I got a bit bored with it.

Grammar: Was it well written and formatted? Or were there mistakes along the way? [10 POINTS] 9, it looks really well well written.

28/40 ..quite sad, I enjoyed her style of written but I was purely bored by it, she lost entertainment marks here.



CHASE
Originality/Creativity: Was your story creative? Unique? Or was it typical? [15 POINTS] 13, definitely a good idea to do a mock interview style pre game

Entertainment: Were the judges entertained while reading your story? Was it fun? Or was it boring? [15 POINTS]10, it was alright, not boring but also had some moments.

Grammar: Was it well written and formatted? Or were there mistakes along the way? [10 POINTS] 8

31/40

KIM
Originality/Creativity: Was your story creative? Unique? Or was it typical? [15 POINTS] 13

Entertainment: Were the judges entertained while reading your story? Was it fun? Or was it boring? [15 POINTS] 13, I was pretty entertained and lol'd at the Rory parts.

Grammar: Was it well written and formatted? Or were there mistakes along the way? [10 POINTS] 8. Adding in things like scene change or something could really have made this flow well.

34/40

MIKI
Originality/Creativity: Was your story creative? Unique? Or was it typical? [15 POINTS] 6 I was confused for the most of it, the only part that made sense was the last paragraph. Honestly, most parts didn't even make sense.

Entertainment: Were the judges entertained while reading your story? Was it fun? Or was it boring? [15 POINTS] 6. I felt like it dragged on and on with no answers to a lot of questions therefore leaving me confused.

Grammar: Was it well written and formatted? Or were there mistakes along the way? [10 POINTS] 6

18/40

SYDNEY
Originality/Creativity: Was your story creative? Unique? Or was it typical? [15 POINTS] 10. It's getting a little repetitive hearing the same story all over again however, she gain points for adding in graphics.

Entertainment: Were the judges entertained while reading your story? Was it fun? Or was it boring? [15 POINTS] 10. I was merely entertained by the pictures.

Grammar: Was it well written and formatted? Or were there mistakes along the way? [10 POINTS] 9 for well formatted and organization.

29/40

VEE
Originality/Creativity: Was your story creative? Unique? Or was it typical? [15 POINTS] 10. Maury was the only creative thing about this, other than that, it's been repetitive as the other stories with the sex/pregnancy, etc.

Entertainment: Were the judges entertained while reading your story? Was it fun? Or was it boring? [15 POINTS] 0! He's making fun of me. No, I was not entertained.... jk, I give it a 11, there were it's moment where I lol'd.

Grammar: Was it well written and formatted? Or were there mistakes along the way? [10 POINTS] 8

29/40

Overall, Kim's was favourite surprisingly!

[Andrea]

I feel like I have such an unpopular opinion lol

[Host Lex]

ALEX: 28/24/30 = 27.3

CANDICE: 33/34/28 = 31.6

CHASE: 29/28/31 = 29.3

KIM: 30/28/34 = 30.6

MIKI: 19/7/18 = 14.6

SYDNEY: 32/37/29 = 32.6

VEE: 28/20/29 = 25.6

[Tyrone]

kimmy nooo!!! why do all the good ones die

go... Vee? Chase??

[Host Lex]

Biggest question was whether or not Miki would vote out Kim. Aaaand she is

Kim's trying to flip Vee and Alex against Sean now